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Star Wars: Path of Shadow

Post by MinifigDesigner on Sat Jun 29, 2013 3:12 am

The child, barely in her teens, only stood. And stared. The man in black robes stared back.

"You have something."

The girl kept silent.

"...I can feel it. Regret...lies...betrayal...and something else, that just seems to gush from your very being: fear. Tell me, girl. What is it, that you fear?"

The girl then began to tremble, as she realized that she was at a dead end.

"Death."

The man's bright yellow eyes glinted, and he began to laugh, almost a howl, the sound like savage daggers impaling the child's ears.

"You must know it well...I can sense your...familiarity with it."

The man then walked closer to her, and he suddenly brushed his long, gaunt fingers over her cheek. Just as suddenly, he slapped her, and the girl experienced pain that she had not known before.

The girl cried out, and immediately began to nurse her cheek. But the man would not relent. He then forcefully grabbed her chin, and made her stare into his eyes...his pupils were rimmed in red.

"But above all else...I can sense strength in you. I can help you...develop that strength..."

The girl had a flicker of hesitation. But then, what any other life had she known? She grasped it.

"T-teach me."

The man then smiled. But this was no smile of joy, or one that made you laugh, or made you feel happy. This smile was that of malice...a smile that told you, "I can help it all go away...for a price."

And a price, there was.

The pale man then spoke, almost enticingly,

"Then you must become my Apprentice."


This is kind of the prologue, I'm not done with yet. Sorry this is random, I kinda had a surge of inspiration at like, 2:00 in the morning. >.<

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Re: Star Wars: Path of Shadow

Post by Zyph on Mon Jul 01, 2013 8:19 pm

Wow very nice! I like it!
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Post by MinifigDesigner on Mon Jul 01, 2013 9:54 pm

Thanks Arwin! Awkward Smile I might write more later.

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